Teh Wozzinator

Thanks Sumi... No, the "young'n" isn't a clone. lol! Teh Wozzinator

haha, it wasn't really made for teens, and it was more for a little kids type theme. but i thought i'd post it anyways since it's one of the few ...

Ok, sorry...I don't remember that rule on the rule list...but there were a lot. I'll have to check that out again. Sorry! I guess I just wanted to post because... ...

I have no fish, let alone a goldfish named Willie, it's all made up. The second was created first, when I made up something to go with the tune because ...

I think that the rhythm's off a bit here, but I'm not really sure how to fix it. What I don't understand is the message? I didn't quite get it.... ...

I think you did a good job, but the rhythm was off again. That's the only thing that needs work--I think that your subjects are really good. But I do ...

This was, um...Interesting, Matt. I really like your poems, you rhyme really well and they're funny. You rhythm was good, I thought. So no edits!

um, i have a question: why are all the "templar"s in gold-ish orange???? I'm confused.... Teh Wozzinator

here's a quick question...should this be rated G or PG? i guess G works, seeing as some other people have put worst stuff as G...I guess i just rated it ...

i agree with those before me who said your characters need more work. also, i wasn't aware whether kearin was a boy or a girl. also, they gave them a ...

is was good, but some of it was a little time for a long edit here, but i liked it. really good, Sumi Teh Wozzinator (btw, eventually i'll hopefully get ...

Wow, I thought that this was really good and imaginative. I don't have anything to say that Sam hasn't said, but I really liked it. Thanks for a great read. ...

Hmm, okay, sorry... I guess I'm just used to that more (unless I'm writing--in which case I'm still spoiled, 'cause if I lowercase an "I" it'll automatically correct it. Sorry.)

haha, thanks. i liked that part too...

as i said before, i have edited it, trying to get it to flow better. i hope i succeeded...once i finish part one i'll post all of the chapters in ...